Okay, here we go :
Looks quite fine, doesn't have to be a masterpiece
I can see, that on these steps, the eyes go more and more apart from each other, it seems to be your major problem.
Face: you shade to much the "sides" of the nose and "ignore" the rest of the face, that makes it look awkward, also (depends on the sourrounding /light and such) the shadow has to be directed under the nose and hair.
She looks quite maskulin and a bit anorexic, because of that dark color on her cheeks.
Same because of the lips, maybe try to make the shape with colors next time
deco: needs shading .__.
maybe you can try to use different sizes of brushes, for a better result
yeah this was one of my worst ones haha. I honestly don't know what happened with this one and I was too lazy to go back and fix it haha. Thanks for the critique though
wooah, that was fast, not bad ;3
It was my pleasure^^
Haha Feel free to check out my better artworks lol
If you want to show me, just do so^^
I think it would be better if you go through my gallery on your own.