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Fabula Artwork 25 by Yettyen Fabula Artwork 25 by Yettyen
Okay, Well I guess I'm getting more trained and it was a bit easier for me this time, but the skin, OMG it almost killed me XDD

I know, he looks pretty naked, that wasn't really my intention XDDD
Yeah, I even blushed, because it doesn't seemed THAT naked on the sketch hahaha XDD

I like it anyway, so , here you go X3

Yvie and Tristan belong to me ^^

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Finally, finally. I hadn't even faved this drawing until now. *feels bad* BUT you get a critique from me, hope you'll be glad and can use what I find. ^^

Motive
Poses: You wanted to show a romantic and intimate moment of a couple. What catches first the view of the person who looks on the drawing, is indeed the pair and their sweet moment. With her hair and his pose there is a perfect balance and no one is dominating the drawing 'sheet'. Only with the poses you depicted both sensitivity and passion. The frame and roses fit very well and underline the message.

Composition
Foreground: As already said, the foreground, meaning the two characters, are very well balanced in this picture and they fill in the 'paper sheet' very well. BUT you must take a bit care about leaving the complete left side of the drawing white and the complete right one covered with her hair. You rescued this a bit with putting all the roses on the left side/ corner, but better try to send some of her hair over there, too. So it's not too abrupt.
Background/ Frame: The frame with the roses come very very well with the drawing and the motive. There is no huge detailed background neccessary when the focus is on the centre, but it's still a strong enough frame (from colour values and details) to balance the drawing. What is a bit a pity is that you simply copied the single roses of the frame, you could have played a bit more with them. But I like the symmetry of the frame which calms down the whole thing and doesn't distract from the characters.

Artwork
Lining: Super nice! Only think I would criticize is that you gave him some sharp lines to define his body, but she has no sharp ones at all. :nod:
Colouration: I cannot say nothing much about that's, it's super pretty and I don't know much about digital inking anway. :XD: her hair and face remind me of Aurora from Sleeping Beauty. *_* So golden, so soft.
Textures: Very very smooth in all parts. I like how you gave shapes and textures in skin, hair, roses, leaves, but still kept the softnes and smoothness of them.
Shading: Technically perfect, but you could have been a bit more adventurous and deep in the darker parts. And ya, you already know now our new understanding of shading, to use different colours etc. ;)

All in all: Nice work and super pretty romantic piece to enjoy to look at! But here and there are some things that could be fixed easily - like the lines or deeper shading. I hope my words could help you a bit. :hug: :heart:
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Freiha Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Da kommt die seit ner Ewigkeit mal wieder on und ändert ihren Namen O_o Konntest du nich was besseres machen? Ich blick ja nie wieder durch mit diesen ganzen Namensänderungen *sniff*

Aaaaber immerhin bin ich dadurch wieder auf deine Gallerie gekommen und da mir das Bild hier jetzt schon zum vierten Mal positiv auffällt, landets in meinen Faves. So, haste jetzt davon.

(Ich kommentiere nur, weil der sagt, ich soll kommentieren...weißt schon, diese dA-Funktion beim Faven xD)

Wie geht's dir eigentlich?
Bald wieder Internet da? :huggle:
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So, ich bin schrecklich ich weiß, ich brauche immer so lange zum antworten :iconleeblushplz:
Freut mich dass es dir gefallen hat!

Ich hab meinen namen ja auch fast wieder XD ich hätte den nie ändern sollen XDD


Hoffe bei dir ist alles klar soweit!:iconbrohugplz:
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Freiha Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, kein Ding. Du warst ja schon ewig nicht mehr da und ich ja au nich so oft :D Hab gar nich gemerkt, dass das Review noch unbeantwortet war.

Ja, stimmt schon. Ich hab mir sowas ähnliches eh schon gedacht, als die das Feature vorgestellt hatten und BAM 1000 Namensänderungen.

Naja, mehr schlecht als recht, aber sollte sich bald bessern :) Nur noch 2 Tage arbeiten und dann muss ich da bis Ende Sept. nich mehr hin.
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ich hatte das immer gelesen, und bei so schönen langen kommentaren mag ich nich einfach "ja danke" schreiben, also bleiben die liegen bis ich weiß was ich schreiben soll, oder aber auch bi ich einfach nur "danke" schreibe :iconpapmingblushplz:

Ja, ich weiß auch nicht was mich da geritten hat, ich war noch nie gut in "originelle" spitznamen ausdenken XD

OOOOOHHHHHH, das heißt etwas freizeit für die Kunst :iconsobeautifulplz::icondafightplz-shy:
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Freiha Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, kenn ich. Bei mir bleiben die dann au immer ewig liegen. Und dann irgendwann passiert das gleich wie bei dir "danke" xDD

Ich auch nicht. *flüster* Mein Name ist aus einem Buch geklaut. *flüster ende*
Und viele der Namen aus meinem Manga hab ich mir von :icongrimadeus: geklaut. Sie hatte mir extra mal ne Liste geschrieben ^^

Ja, hoffe ich. Oder Monster Hunter *sabber*
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha, ich kenne den namen nur von Pferden. Der schönste Pferdename ist für mich noch immer "Fallada" der Rappe aus einem märchen, er war das liebste pferd der prinzessin, die wurde aber von ihrer dienerin gelinkt und dem pferd der kopf abgeschlagen, welcher dann über einem torbogen hing unter dem die prinzessin jeden tag durchlief, und sie sagte "Oh Fallada du da hangest" und er sagte "Oh jungfer du da gangest, wenn das deine Mutter wüsste, das herz täte ihr zerspringen" oder so ähnlich XD

muss mal nachgoogeln was das ist XD
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Freiha Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah ja, ich kenn das Märchen.
Heißt das nicht "Die Gänsemagd" oder so ähnlich?

Aber stimmt, Fallada is ein richtig schöner Name für ein Pferd :)

:) Das ist ein Spiel, da muss man Monster fangen...oder töten. Aber das is richtig toll. Da gibt's so viele verschiedene Waffen und ich spiel das immer zusammen mit meinem Freund im Multiplayer (und der trägt da wirklich was zur "Vorankommen" bei und is nich nur Nebenzeug) und man muss auch nicht stundenlang Monster verkloppen um ein Level aufzusteigen, denn es gibt kein Levelsystem. Man wird nur durch Rüstung und Waffen stärker und die kann man sich bauen, nachdem man Monster ausgenommen hat, weil man zum Beispiel die Haut von so ner Echse braucht usw.
Und zu zweit kann man dann auch bissi so strategisch vorgehen. Also einer mit ner Fernwaffe zum Statusveränderungen zufügen und einer mit ner schweren Waffe um gut Schaden zu machen oder so. :)
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
genau, die Gänsemagd :iconkittennodplz:

ahahaha, "(und der trägt da wirklich was zur "Vorankommen" bei und is nich nur Nebenzeug)" als wäre er sonst nur lästige Deko XDDDD

aber hört sich cool an **
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MoondancerAya Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG!! This is soking hawt...
The art work is so beautiful...I feel like I should look away, but I can't..its so beautiful!!
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahaha, thank you so much :heart:
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Meinona Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is amazing! the skin is so well drawn and colored!! THAT naked hehe well we still don't see any things that need a content filter so It's okay ^^ amazing work jette!
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always blush, when it comes to this XDDD OMG I even blush on my own OCs XDDD

Thank you a thousand times you like it that much ;___;

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SailorCancer1 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thats just...whoa~~~
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you honey :iconloveloveplz:
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SailorCancer1 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
welcome O u O
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shnoogums5060 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful work there, Jette.

And they may look naked, but it's alright by me, dear. :) I don't mind it.
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm relieved no one complains about it X3
Thank you very much for your support :iconloveloveplz:
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shnoogums5060 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My pleasure. I do draw some nude ladies myself every once in a while.
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I C XDDD
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shnoogums5060 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:nod:
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Kyuuketsuki84 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
wow these passionate ones are gorgeous
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much dear :iconaawwplz:
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Sayajin-Jackass Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Woooooooooooow!!!! richtig leidenschaftlich!!! Ihr Gesichtsausdruck spricht Bände!!! Hammer! :D
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Vielen lieben dank, ey :icontearyguyplz:
Freut mich riesig, dass es so rüberkommt und es dir gefällt *w*
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Sayajin-Jackass Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
Es ist nun einfach toll!! :D
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Sailor-Serenity Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
This is absolutely stunning *.* the colouring is just so wonderful as are the poses, Yvette looks beautiful - that hair = :heart: and Tristan is just so sexy :giggle::heart:
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, thank you :giggle: I absolutely love Tristan XDDD
I'm so happy you like it :heart:__:heart:
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sawai159 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Filmographer
That's just waay too awesome :la:
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:la: Thank you so so so much!!!! :iconloveloveplz:
I'm happy you like :icontearyguyplz:
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Lunixina Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaaand another super amazing drawing is done!! :clap:
I don't know where to start, because this artwork ( as always ) is something very very special :love: and we love a lot Yvie and Tristan! :heart:
Her golden hair are fluffy and shiny *u* I like very much how you drew them.. also to cover "the parts" =D great imagination!
Tristan is gorgeous ( yeah.... very gorgeous! *ç* ) .. I will not tell more about him u////ù you know what I think about..
These artworks you're doing, the "theme" , if we can say that, are very amazing :clap: because you're showing the best of them :) and it's impossible not to love them :clap: This new coloring style, is simply unique, and it's easy to understand that you like it a lot *^* so, don't give up and surprise us again with the other couples :la:
You're the best!
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much sweetie!! :icontearyguyplz:
I also don't know where to start, because your comment is (as always) so heartwarming and kind ;w;

I know, I know, great minds work together :iconteheplz:
Thank you as always for all your support honey :iconaawwplz:
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Phoebe22 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist
Wahnsinn. Sieht echt klasse aus!! :) Gute arbeit, meine Liebe! <3
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Vielen lieben Dank :iconaawwplz:
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Phoebe22 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist
Gern geschehen! ^^
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HightreeDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love how well all of the colors work so well together! It reminds me of art nouveau. Great job!
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Yettyen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for your kind words C:
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